i like it very much, but u have a little problem, it´s the "be", from "will be" (i know that it´s very hard sometime change this, but if u write "b", copy, paste u solutionate it). Sorry very much for the critique, but ii is AWESOME^^
Thank you for the warning - i didn't see that. mmm... i'm really not 100% shure how to change it - i'm still really new, so i'll just leave it for now - until i lurn to fix it. I hope people won't mind.
This is a very special turorial, doing for people like u, to perfecionate your technique^^ (Honestly, i didn´t know how do motivationals, look the first i do, but working hard like are u doing, u will better than me^^)